| Account limit of 2000 requests per hour exceeded. |
Care t comment/critique my poem please?
A Prayer to Venus
Oh, how I yearn for yearning!
How my heart cries out in vain,
To know your wretched loveliness
And feel its wretched pain!
How much I lust for your sweet fruit,
That withers on its vine,
Enthralled forever in pursuit,
Of that which is divine.
Some say you are a vixen cruel,
A swan that always dives
Whenever hunter's lance comes near;
But those souls aren't alive.
For what is this fell path we lead,
If not a wayward road,
That promises redemption sweet,
But offers no abode?
And in this absence of a house,
(No peace we humans find,)
Why not pull buttons from your blouse,
And chase your hapless rinds?
And yet, I'd like to mount such chase,
I'd love to pull a stitch,
But I've no thread to sew the lace,
No hand to flip that switch!
So here I stand, dame, primed for love,
I give a wayward prayer,
From your most chaste and lucid dove,
So desperate for despair.
Ditto what your first answerer said. Very much enjoyed. And it just kept getting better as I read. Stumbled on 'Whenever hunter's...' but only on first read.
![]() |
![]() NWOT BONNY Wedding dress Bridal gown lace up corset White w grape vine size 14 $251.10 Time Remaining: 1d 13h 28m Buy It Now for only: $251.10 |

